Hell yeah! I know I'm not Shakespeare (Basterd) and I'll never be, doesn't matter as this is a homework everybody had to make I think it will be just great to have your comments!
Love you guys!
P.S Keep thinking in your costume to wear this Occtober 29th!
SONNET I
The sorrow that I dwell I shall explain:
She was a shade in a full of sun day
-Is a plutonian mistress- everyone tell
A blue bird without wings learning to fly
A white house of cards playing to die,
-Is a plutonian mistress- everyone tell
Sudden rash of distress, I couldn’t yell.
Seemed to distend all the worlds in hers
A queen that slaved the voices prisoners
The pressure of a bomb kept in her soul
A lone Ticking-clock all in her reign sole
Hurry my dream, the physicians are here
You could have escaped me but not thee.